The Final Scene

One last word cloud and I mean to be done until Dead Man's Trigger is ready to go. I needed, I just had to see how the intensity of that final scene in Raven's Tears came out as a word cloud.

My jaw dropped when I saw it. Clicking on it should give you a larger image, so you can see the small words if you wish.

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Zoom in. How creepy that the tiny word at the top is "surreal," and how those large, harsh, danger-inflected words seem to be lunging toward you through the screen? And at the bottom is Angel askew, hemmed in by hateful, baleful words like Night, and Done, and Nothing, and Cut, and Con, and Buried.

I didn't get to select for that, but I'm here to tell you if you haven't read it yet that I couldn't have placed them more appropriately, myself.

Happy Hump Day, everyone. We're about ready to send the first chunk of freshly rewritten DMT manuscript to our proofreader. How's your Wednesday going?